tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3748450112059187094.post6097679787252745927..comments2022-10-31T01:25:15.796-07:00Comments on Daron Henson - Freelance Writer: A Night of RespiteDaron Hensonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10705561475185397346noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3748450112059187094.post-53184605902858704662013-03-09T08:13:36.322-08:002013-03-09T08:13:36.322-08:00Daron,
This is so well written, it made me nearly ...Daron,<br />This is so well written, it made me nearly crying... it is such a special memory and a very special blog post as well!! Great job!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3748450112059187094.post-63618304459159769332013-03-09T07:11:54.231-08:002013-03-09T07:11:54.231-08:00I think the cold, snowy night an apt image for the...I think the cold, snowy night an apt image for the old man's lonely nights.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3748450112059187094.post-48238960938045234752013-03-08T15:01:16.318-08:002013-03-08T15:01:16.318-08:00Nice story. I think it might be improved if you r...Nice story. I think it might be improved if you removed some of the interjected descriptions such as <i>The story continued. I mentioned to her the music of the day and the party.</i> and <i>Susan listened.</i>. I'm not sure the parts like that necessarily add to or further the action of the story that is being told by the man and may serve more as a distraction to the reader.<br /><br />Otherwise, this is a poignant vignette of one generation reaching out to another. Well done.<br /><br />Lee <br />An A to Z Co-Host <br /><a href="http://tossingitout.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Tossing It Out</a><br />Arlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3748450112059187094.post-88144096376747859522013-03-08T14:39:48.356-08:002013-03-08T14:39:48.356-08:00I am very much moved by the particularity of this ...I am very much moved by the particularity of this story. Usually,good memories are always made when family and friends gather around the table for conversation and delicious food or something of the kind, but in this story, it was the magical moment of two strangers who found solace to each-other company. The magic of the story is an undying memory.<br />Guylain Gustave Mokehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07751037824822620140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3748450112059187094.post-28365736252327113812013-03-08T13:12:38.980-08:002013-03-08T13:12:38.980-08:00Good job Daron. Nice.Good job Daron. Nice.J.S. Andersenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04832152980381929422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3748450112059187094.post-89018076488498166382013-03-08T11:03:35.017-08:002013-03-08T11:03:35.017-08:00Very nice DaronVery nice DaronElisabeth Zguta, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10081907532476759685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3748450112059187094.post-87247618028074937462013-03-08T10:33:50.782-08:002013-03-08T10:33:50.782-08:00A wonderful depiction of the value of memories. Gr...A wonderful depiction of the value of memories. Great story.Ronnie Dauberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11063369594493685575noreply@blogger.com